I wasn’t happy with the flow of the Nascent preview, so I rewrote it. As in, I completely replaced the old one. It also gave me a chance to flesh out some other things that happen later in the story. I hope the added foreshadowing will serve as a more effective plot hook. The feedback I’ve received on it was helpful. My sincere thanks to all of you.
In other words, yes I actually do read comments people leave here. My goal is to deliver a quality, engrossing story. There is still no definite date on when the novel will be available. However, I am spending more of my free time working on it.