Nascent Preview Rewritten

I wasn’t happy with the flow of the Nascent preview, so I rewrote it. As in, I completely replaced the old one.  It also gave me a chance to flesh out some other things that happen later in the story.  I hope the added foreshadowing will serve as a more effective plot hook.  The feedback I’ve received on it was helpful.  My sincere thanks to all of you.

In other words, yes I actually do read comments people leave here.  My goal is to deliver a quality, engrossing story.  There is still no definite date on when the novel will be available.  However, I am spending more of my free time working on it.

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